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I got bored, and started ranting on Facebook.
#1
I'm not going to enjoy talking to you.

I'm not going to get to know you.

I'm not going to tell you about myself.

People make me sick, a bunch of mindless self-indulgent fuc(k)s.

If I had the chance, I'd kill each and every one of you.

Fortunately, for you, if I killed every single one of you, I'd run out of ammunition, because when I say I'd kill everyone, I mean everyone.

To my Ex's, fuc(k) you, get hit by a car, fall down some stairs, slit your throat, blow out your brains, hang yourself, throw yourself in front of a train.

To anyone wanting to know about me, don't bother.

I'll stay nice and quiet until I'm dead, after all, you'll need something to gossip about while you're bound and gagged in the back of the trunk.

That's not a flashlight, and I'm not happy to see you, that's just a 357, a 357 that'll shatter your skull and leave itsy bitsy pieces of your brain scattered across your living room.

Now that we got that outta the way, I enjoy long walks on the beach, sunsets, and chocolates.
I sit in this small hole and think

the voices aren't real

but they have the most beautiful ideas.
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#2
Wow very nice. Very violent. I would write a response but that takes too much brainpower on my part. I especially like the ending. How it goes from rawr i am a raging beast going to destroy you, to, hey this is what i like how about you. lol
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#3
Ah its very good you should seriously consider become a professional writer!
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#4
Some over the top angst but creatively I like it. So you posted this as-is on your FB page?
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#5
(01-04-2011, 12:56 AM)Omniscient Wrote: Some over the top angst but creatively I like it. So you posted this as-is on your FB page?

Yeah, I posted it in my biography section, lmao.
I sit in this small hole and think

the voices aren't real

but they have the most beautiful ideas.
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#6
Too bad u state:

I'm not going to tell you about myself.

And finish with

Now that we got that outta the way, I enjoy long walks on the beach, sunsets, and chocolates.

Ah well, what would i know, i'm a GFX designer not a poet Tongue
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(01-04-2011, 01:43 PM)Raain Wrote: Too bad u state:

I'm not going to tell you about myself.

And finish with

Now that we got that outta the way, I enjoy long walks on the beach, sunsets, and chocolates.

Ah well, what would i know, i'm a GFX designer not a poet Tongue

Called irony my friend.

And anyway, I'm being sarcastic with the ending.
I sit in this small hole and think

the voices aren't real

but they have the most beautiful ideas.
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#8
Allright, yeah i sometimes have a hard time interpreting a text like that.
Often can't tell what the author is trying to say, or how he is saying it.
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#9
Surely people be hating on you if you posted that? Big Grin
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#10
Looks really god but you send like you need anger management. lol.
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