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My English Class Poem [Angel Of Death]
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(03-10-2012, 01:25 PM)Winter™ Wrote: Would the words:

Just an immortal man, dressed all in black
My face always ready to attack...

Would attack work?

That leaves a little too much for the imagination and leaves a gap for the reader which breaks the train of thought, which really isn't good in poetry.
Quaero gloria stellarum.
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RE: My English Class Poem [Angel Of Death] - by Alreiger - 03-10-2012, 02:31 PM

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