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[SHORT POEM] Silent night.
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(05-25-2012, 07:15 PM)Daniel Faraday Wrote: Using at the end of the line really helps the repetition, but I do agree that the usage could be better. Tears, Idle Tears is a great example of this.

http://www.online-literature.com/donne/729/
I've done a many poems that have repetition at the beginning. It's possible. Look up some of shakespeares stuff.
Do what thou wilt shall be the whole of the Law. Love is the law, love under will.
.::The Rights of Man::.
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[SHORT POEM] Silent night. - by Magma - 05-01-2012, 05:28 PM
RE: [SHORT POEM] Silent night. - by fanta - 05-01-2012, 05:31 PM
RE: [SHORT POEM] Silent night. - by Corpzz - 05-01-2012, 08:52 PM
RE: [SHORT POEM] Silent night. - by Magma - 05-02-2012, 08:44 AM
RE: [SHORT POEM] Silent night. - by Canoris - 05-24-2012, 08:26 PM
RE: [SHORT POEM] Silent night. - by Canoris - 05-26-2012, 07:16 AM
RE: [SHORT POEM] Silent night. - by gsc3po - 06-24-2012, 06:14 PM
RE: [SHORT POEM] Silent night. - by pearl - 02-14-2020, 11:26 PM
RE: [SHORT POEM] Silent night. - by pearl - 02-19-2020, 09:49 PM
RE: [SHORT POEM] Silent night. - by pearl - 02-19-2020, 10:04 PM
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RE: [SHORT POEM] Silent night. - by pearl - 02-19-2020, 10:16 PM
RE: [SHORT POEM] Silent night. - by pearl - 02-19-2020, 10:18 PM
RE: [SHORT POEM] Silent night. - by pearl - 02-19-2020, 10:21 PM
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RE: [SHORT POEM] Silent night. - by pearl - 02-19-2020, 10:25 PM
RE: [SHORT POEM] Silent night. - by pearl - 02-19-2020, 10:29 PM
RE: [SHORT POEM] Silent night. - by pearl - 02-19-2020, 10:31 PM
RE: [SHORT POEM] Silent night. - by pearl - 02-19-2020, 10:33 PM
RE: [SHORT POEM] Silent night. - by pearl - 02-19-2020, 10:37 PM
RE: [SHORT POEM] Silent night. - by pearl - 02-19-2020, 10:39 PM
RE: [SHORT POEM] Silent night. - by pearl - 02-19-2020, 10:45 PM
RE: [SHORT POEM] Silent night. - by pearl - 02-19-2020, 10:48 PM
RE: [SHORT POEM] Silent night. - by pearl - 02-19-2020, 10:52 PM
RE: [SHORT POEM] Silent night. - by pearl - 02-19-2020, 11:02 PM
RE: [SHORT POEM] Silent night. - by pearl - 02-19-2020, 11:07 PM
RE: [SHORT POEM] Silent night. - by pearl - 02-19-2020, 11:08 PM
RE: [SHORT POEM] Silent night. - by pearl - 02-19-2020, 11:11 PM
RE: [SHORT POEM] Silent night. - by pearl - 02-19-2020, 11:15 PM
RE: [SHORT POEM] Silent night. - by pearl - 02-19-2020, 11:29 PM
RE: [SHORT POEM] Silent night. - by pearl - 02-19-2020, 11:32 PM
RE: [SHORT POEM] Silent night. - by pearl - 02-19-2020, 11:35 PM
RE: [SHORT POEM] Silent night. - by pearl - 02-19-2020, 11:37 PM
RE: [SHORT POEM] Silent night. - by pearl - 02-19-2020, 11:40 PM
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RE: [SHORT POEM] Silent night. - by pearl - 02-19-2020, 11:45 PM
RE: [SHORT POEM] Silent night. - by pearl - 02-19-2020, 11:47 PM
RE: [SHORT POEM] Silent night. - by pearl - 02-19-2020, 11:50 PM
RE: [SHORT POEM] Silent night. - by pearl - 02-19-2020, 11:52 PM
RE: [SHORT POEM] Silent night. - by pearl - 02-19-2020, 11:54 PM
RE: [SHORT POEM] Silent night. - by pearl - 02-19-2020, 11:56 PM
RE: [SHORT POEM] Silent night. - by pearl - 02-19-2020, 11:58 PM
RE: [SHORT POEM] Silent night. - by pearl - 02-19-2020, 11:59 PM
RE: [SHORT POEM] Silent night. - by pearl - 02-20-2020, 12:08 AM
RE: [SHORT POEM] Silent night. - by pearl - 02-20-2020, 12:10 AM
RE: [SHORT POEM] Silent night. - by pearl - 02-20-2020, 12:14 AM
RE: [SHORT POEM] Silent night. - by pearl - 02-20-2020, 12:16 AM
RE: [SHORT POEM] Silent night. - by pearl - 02-20-2020, 12:19 AM
RE: [SHORT POEM] Silent night. - by pearl - 02-20-2020, 12:23 AM
RE: [SHORT POEM] Silent night. - by pearl - 02-20-2020, 12:25 AM
RE: [SHORT POEM] Silent night. - by pearl - 02-20-2020, 12:27 AM
RE: [SHORT POEM] Silent night. - by pearl - 02-20-2020, 12:55 AM
RE: [SHORT POEM] Silent night. - by pearl - 02-20-2020, 12:59 AM
RE: [SHORT POEM] Silent night. - by pearl - 02-20-2020, 01:05 AM
RE: [SHORT POEM] Silent night. - by pearl - 02-20-2020, 01:10 AM
RE: [SHORT POEM] Silent night. - by pearl - 02-20-2020, 01:14 AM
RE: [SHORT POEM] Silent night. - by pearl - 02-20-2020, 01:20 AM
RE: [SHORT POEM] Silent night. - by pearl - 02-20-2020, 01:23 AM

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