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12-15-2009, 02:35 PM
(12-13-2009, 02:39 AM)TanktheCWB Wrote: Never a problem; If it ever grows too much, and you have some spare change; Give me a Ring. Smile

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Are you asking him 4 money.
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12-15-2009, 10:24 PM
Me? Ask for money?

Quite the Contrary.
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03-07-2010, 09:17 PM
is this the thesis statement?

Because if it isn't than this is one short essay
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03-07-2010, 09:24 PM
(03-07-2010, 09:17 PM)Slankey Wrote: is this the thesis statement?

Because if it isn't than this is one short essay

No.

It's 5 paragraphs long. I'd rather make a short one that gets the point across than a very long one that bores my readers.
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#15
03-09-2010, 11:07 PM
It's alright. The conclusion is a bit weak in my opinion. It's good, but not exactly SAT material.
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#16
04-08-2010, 03:02 AM
It is very good. You really showed what you feel. And that is what essays should do. It should impart to the reader the emotion and the passion that the writer wants to express. Wow. All I can say is wow.
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04-08-2010, 09:40 AM
I do not like it
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04-09-2010, 12:36 AM
I'm going to request that this be locked. Thanks all, for your opinions.
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