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[Short Poem] Together We Fall

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[Short Poem] Together We Fall
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01-03-2012, 11:19 PM (This post was last modified: 01-04-2012, 01:45 AM by Quizzical.)
Not bad, personally like the last line, very good. Has a good flow and rhythm to it, and possibly in the future for my girlfriends birthday I might put this in the card Smile
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01-04-2012, 03:43 PM
It's decent, I really like the end of it.
I prefer rhyming poems though.
It was very nice though, good job, keep on writing.


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#13
01-04-2012, 05:52 PM
Great poem. Did you write it for school? Or did you just do it for fun?
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