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[Short Poem] Together We Fall
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12-17-2011, 12:17 PM
We can hold eachother up as the world tries to pull us down.
Our love will keep us strong as we fight this endless battle. If we shall fall, then the world has won, But our love is forever, and we have fallen as one. /opinions? 
12-17-2011, 12:57 PM
Great poem, short and sweet. You should wright some more.
12-17-2011, 01:04 PM
(12-17-2011, 12:57 PM)Epeolatry Wrote: Great poem, short and sweet. You should wright some more. I actually have, an some are posted here and on HackForums.
12-21-2011, 11:26 AM
Nice poems. I can't even write a good story, let alone song or poem. XD
12-24-2011, 02:31 AM
Not bad at all. Have you any other work we can read?
12-30-2011, 12:18 PM
(12-24-2011, 02:31 AM)King Wrote: Not bad at all. Have you any other work we can read? I've poster of my work here. Just look at some other threads I've created.
12-30-2011, 01:47 PM
Nice poem, short and straight to the point. Made me wonder.
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