My Published Poems

[Impulses SF]

It was a school project, basically you wrote poems throughout a period of 1 month and my english teacher helped us edit it.

I know it is not the best, but poetry does intrest me.
My teacher was well connected and is a decently known author.

Book Name: Raising Humanity
Writen by: High School students
Edited by: Michael E. Sweet
Featuring: - An introduction by Martin Sheen (Famous Actor, father of Charlie Sheen)
- An introduction by Marc Garneau (First Canadian astronaut in space)

My Poem:

The Next Morning

Waking the next morning,
my eyes fare filled with confusion,
A sensation of fear
trembles down my body.

Mom tells me
my brother is suffering.
Last night is a blur,
says the pounding in my head.

Then it hits me,
I'd promise to only have one.
Promise broken.
Drunk behind the wheel
I lost control...

The sensation of fear vanishes,
it is replaced by regret.

Thanks guys, Don't be to critical please!
It was my 3rd poem. I was published in another book, I will post that poem later.

[G0dfath3r]

Seems to me quite impressive work,you have done pretty good job,people here should tell you about your mistakes.Just want to say one thing you have written your heart saying words.

[Impulses SF]

Thanks for the response G0dfath3r!
I will try and find the other Book I was in and post up my poem from that one.

[Anon]

Don't get me wrong champion this is very very good work here, but i thought poems rhyme i have read it in wrong i didn't find the rhymes. Then again i don't have a interest in poems as I'm a song writer.

All in All GOOD JOB!

[xMan]

Nice job! and it got published? wow thats amazing!!!!

[Zumog]

I like it. I was never the best at writing poems or story's at school. But I'm working on it ^_^

[Crawls]

I'm impressed man keep up the good work.

[BlackChaos]

Great poem. A bit difficult to follow at first, but perhaps thats just me. I got it after reading it the second time though.

Don't get me wrong champion this is very very good work here, but i thought poems rhyme i have read it in wrong i didn't find the rhymes. Then again i don't have a interest in poems as I'm a song writer.

All in All GOOD JOB!

Not all poems rhyme. What he wrote is a free verse poem.