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Second render sing - Farm
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#1
09-30-2010, 04:41 PM
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09-30-2010, 08:25 PM
I don't like having two focal points: the house and the girl. It just seems that you threw some C4Ds and the girl render in there, along with some text.

I'm not a fan, sorry. I've seen better from you. Smile
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09-30-2010, 09:45 PM
(09-30-2010, 08:25 PM)NEC Wrote: I don't like having two focal points: the house and the girl. It just seems that you threw some C4Ds and the girl render in there, along with some text.

I'm not a fan, sorry. I've seen better from you. Smile

i am going to have to say that i disagree with you, i think that it looks really good, and the main focul point (the girl) is alot stronger then the house. good job
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10-01-2010, 03:08 AM
Take out the render and it would look much better.
Also the dots don't really suit.
All I can think of right now that instead of having that render maybe put like some wolves in the background, not sure what else could fit.
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#5
10-01-2010, 03:15 AM
I like it, appears as if she is dreaming of the shack.
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