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#11
11-08-2011, 05:50 PM
it was beautiful it made my nipples cry. i love you
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#12
11-14-2011, 12:25 PM
It's indeed creative and i like it.
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#13
11-26-2011, 06:27 AM
nice one dude like that poem!!! give me more..
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#14
11-26-2011, 06:36 AM
Sorry, but that doesn't look that nice. 3/10.
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#15
11-26-2011, 09:08 AM
Absolutely beautiful. I agree with the guy who said to record yourself singing/rapping it.

Are you as talented in singing as you are writing?
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#16
11-26-2011, 09:32 AM
I think you could do alot better if you wrote about happy stuff.

Just a tip.
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#17
11-26-2011, 10:44 AM
It's alright, but I don't know who mixes Poem and Rap?
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#18
11-26-2011, 11:45 AM
I like it, is this a true verse? or just something u randomly came up with in ur mind?
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#19
11-26-2011, 02:13 PM
I liked it. Do you do poetry often?
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#20
11-26-2011, 06:57 PM
This is some beautiful poetry my friend, you should write a book or something. It'd be funny, I like that your poems are about real time stuff and not about love and all that crap!
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