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[Poem/Rap] Absurd
#1
They say a picture is worth a thousand words,
But if I have a hundred of them, they would still be unheard.
My random ramblings are read just to leave you absurd,
But if you look a little deeper, then hidden meaning you'll observe.
My syllables shall leave you all bruised and battered,
Theres a fire in my soul that your eyes have conjured,
If there once was a saying, all thats gold has glittered,
Rhyming is a multi-lingual skill I've mastered,
Don't try to count the poetic devices uttered,
Because it isn't just written for the record.
Your voice reverbrates through the distance unblurred,
Shakespeare once said, "'Twas like a song bird",
And its that song that has my heart conquered.
You did it not in spite, but in love I figured,
And thats whats locked inside my mind, treasured.
But your blatant disregard is what left me fractured,
I'd preferred it if you stabbed me in the back, punctured,
My self esteem broken into pieces, shattered,
To a million different regions it has now scattered,
My resolve you have strengthened, my inner Hulk you've angered,
No time for second guessing, my pride you've injured,
But all of that i've mended in a trice, soldered,
Because you probably know by now that I'm a freaking wizard.
If you've read it this far and think its still absurd,
Then read it all again, my message is still unheard.

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Author's Note: I was bored and decided to rhyme a lot using random words. It turned out pretty 'dope' Tongue
What do you all think?
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#2
You need to beef it up . Looks great though . It would be easier to read if it was divided .
I hate sex in the movies. Tried it once, the seat folded up, the drink spilled and that ice,
well it really chilled her mood.

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(04-24-2011, 03:41 AM)Telhast Wrote: You need to beef it up . Looks great though . It would be easier to read if it was divided .

Its not completely a rap. It can be read as either a rap or a poem Tongue
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