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My Published Poems
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Great poem. A bit difficult to follow at first, but perhaps thats just me. I got it after reading it the second time though. Smile


(06-09-2011, 06:04 AM)Anon Wrote: Don't get me wrong champion this is very very good work here, but i thought poems rhyme i have read it in wrong i didn't find the rhymes. Then again i don't have a interest in poems as I'm a song writer.

All in All GOOD JOB!

Not all poems rhyme. What he wrote is a free verse poem.

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My Published Poems - by Impulses SF - 05-24-2011, 07:41 PM
RE: My Published Poems - by G0dfath3r - 05-25-2011, 03:27 AM
RE: My Published Poems - by Impulses SF - 05-25-2011, 05:39 AM
RE: My Published Poems - by Anon - 06-09-2011, 06:04 AM
RE: My Published Poems - by BlackChaos - 06-11-2011, 05:17 PM
RE: My Published Poems - by xMan - 06-09-2011, 07:54 AM
RE: My Published Poems - by Zumog - 06-09-2011, 01:02 PM
RE: My Published Poems - by Crawls - 06-09-2011, 06:40 PM

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