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Burning heart.
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(12-06-2010, 07:18 PM)xerotic Wrote: I love it, save for mournful. I would replace it, the pronunciation is off from the rest of the poem.
Thanks ;D What word should I replace it with?
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Burning heart. - by Beautiful - 12-06-2010, 07:09 PM
RE: Burning heart. - by xerotic - 12-06-2010, 07:18 PM
RE: Burning heart. - by Beautiful - 12-06-2010, 07:26 PM

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