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Common cents isn't so common ;)
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03-25-2011, 11:00 AM (This post was last modified: 07-30-2020, 12:52 PM by fuck_prohibition.)
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03-26-2011, 08:01 AM
This definitely is more focused. I like the image of the neighbourhood. Although the poem is simple to digest, there is a lot of issues which it covers.

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03-26-2011, 11:58 AM (This post was last modified: 07-30-2020, 12:52 PM by fuck_prohibition.)
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03-26-2011, 12:21 PM
It is very true and direct. Good work bud.
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