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03-21-2011, 06:01 PM (This post was last modified: 07-30-2020, 12:53 PM by fuck_prohibition.)
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03-22-2011, 03:14 AM
Sounds like rap in my head, I like it. There is a nice rhythm to the syllables as well.

Were you listening to music when you wrote this? Or did you have a particular imagery in mind?
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03-22-2011, 03:30 AM
I had an image in my head. Not intended to be a rap though. Thanks for the feedback.
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03-22-2011, 03:33 AM
What was the image?
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03-22-2011, 03:39 AM (This post was last modified: 07-30-2020, 12:53 PM by fuck_prohibition.)
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03-22-2011, 07:29 AM
I read your other posts. You seem like a thoughtful person who is sensitive with words and their meanings. It is wonderful to have members like you who contribute to this section.
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03-22-2011, 11:32 AM (This post was last modified: 07-30-2020, 12:53 PM by fuck_prohibition.)
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#8
03-22-2011, 12:02 PM
This is really nice Smile
It sounded more of a rap to me though. Smile
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03-22-2011, 01:04 PM
I concur with Ms. Eve. It would seem to me that your composition of words is quite exceptional. And yes, it did seem much like a rap, even though rap is the either complete ignorance + unique usage of imagery + words, or, advanced sensitivity to the words and meanings + advanced composition of the words and how they work together.
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