New Signature+Avatar [2nd attempt]

[Dogbert]

I was bored, so I decieded to make myself an SF avatar, it took only a few minutes so I don't know how well I did, it's my first attempt at making an avatar from scratch.. Also I am new to photoshop, so don't be too hard on me!


Random signature I've been working on for a while, I am really stumped with this picture so I went random on it. I think it looks okay but could be much better.. By the way, this is only my second signature I've ever attempted, so not that great anyway.

After and before


Let me know what you think?

[Peter L]

1st. Simple, but nice.

2nd. Everything looks out of place and just pasted there. No blending.

[AceInfinity]

1st - the feather is rendered really badly, but the color scheme is good. Work on the text a bit more, and try to make the quality of every piece of the image match (preferrable higher resolution). Nothing is more noticable than a low/high resolution mix of an image.

2nd - sorry, but I like the original image better, you added too much contrast or brightness to the newer edited image, and it's a little oversaturated.

[Girp]

1.Good for a newbie,I kind of like that.
2.I think its to bright,try making it a little darker.

[3D™]

1st: I like it a lot.
2nd: Too bright and maybe mix/blend it a lil.

[alberto75]

good work, the second picture is really nice

[BreShiE]

1st - the feather is rendered really badly, but the color scheme is good. Work on the text a bit more, and try to make the quality of every piece of the image match (preferrable higher resolution). Nothing is more noticable than a low/high resolution mix of an image.

2nd - sorry, but I like the original image better, you added too much contrast or brightness to the newer edited image, and it's a little oversaturated.

I'd have to agree with what Ace said, he saved me a lot of typing by putting how I feel too.

[bateyy]

Not the best work ive seen:/

5/10.

Keep trying.