Our first action movie/short

[Botted]

Well, yesterday we (me, my brother, and 2 of our friends) filmed and edited our first action movie.

Enjoy, be sure to leave a nice comment

Oh and there was some editing mistakes, so just ignore them. Next movie will include better sound effects/blood/muzzle flashes.

[yt]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=I3ltxqYskbw[/yt]

[x2theone2x]

I like it. Keep it up and you'll be very popular on youtube trust me.

[NekoChan]

Few things to work on.

- Gun holding, you have to learn how to actually hold guns.
- Fight scenes, make em more real and add some sounds.
- How did somebody get hit with a gun, pretended to be dead and then moved like he never been hit lol.

[DAMINK™]

Yep i like it. Keep it up.
Hey wait your banned? Why is that?

[pers2981]

Few things to work on.

- Gun holding, you have to learn how to actually hold guns.
- Fight scenes, make em more real and add some sounds.
- How did somebody get hit with a gun, pretended to be dead and then moved like he never been hit lol.

also dont wear purple shoes lol!.

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also watch theses
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[Robbieava]

That was actually not too bad. I enjoyed it

[Minus-Zero]

Was pretty good for a first try.

I think the ginger should wear a mask or something as it distracts the viewer...
Also, the way you held the guns was poor. No one holds a gun like that.

[Botted]

Yeah sorry guys I was banned, and my flaming red hair is freakin distracting but thanks for the positive feedback, we got action essentials and are making a new better video this weekend, it shall be sick!

[x04a]

It wasn't very realistic