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[ Poem ] That Moment In Time - Spafic - 03-19-2012
If I could hold you in my arms
Just for one, single moment in time,
I would go from a depressed, lonely boy...
To a happy, loving man.
I'll remember that moment forever,
And forever, that moment is mine.
Opinions?
Yes, I wrote this to express my feelings toward someone.
RE: [ Poem ] That Moment In Time - JustHayden - 03-20-2012
Sounds pretty good, whoever you give this to will love it.
RE: [ Poem ] That Moment In Time - I_GOT_MODZ - 03-20-2012
That's a really nice poem you wrote. Like he said above, whoever you give this to will love it.
RE: [ Poem ] That Moment In Time - Nifty - 03-21-2012
I like it, very short and sweet and sounds nice when read aloud. Someone who writes poems like these have real hearts.
RE: [ Poem ] That Moment In Time - Steven Gerrard - 03-25-2012
Short and snappy, straight to the point.
If I was going to receive a poem, I'd want one like this, not a really long one.
So good job.
Keep practising and you'll get ever better!
RE: [ Poem ] That Moment In Time - [nWo] Hulk Hogan - 03-25-2012
i liked it. when i was younger i used to write all the time. i had a gf who lived in Kentucky and we kept in contact via email, and i would profess my love to her with poetry.
keep it up.
matter of fact, you should enter some of your poetry to poetry.com. they have contests and give out prizes. if you send a nice poem in, they will print it out and frame it for you.
RE: [ Poem ] That Moment In Time - Empowerment - 03-25-2012
That is a nice poem. I feel for the lucky person you give that to expressing your love.
RE: [ Poem ] That Moment In Time - Spafic - 03-27-2012
(03-25-2012, 11:01 AM)[nWo] Hulk Hogan Wrote: i liked it. when i was younger i used to write all the time. i had a gf who lived in Kentucky and we kept in contact via email, and i would profess my love to her with poetry.
keep it up.
matter of fact, you should enter some of your poetry to poetry.com. they have contests and give out prizes. if you send a nice poem in, they will print it out and frame it for you.
Thank you for the feedback. I also took a look at that poetry.com website an I uploaded it to there, along with some of my other writing.