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Common cents isn't so common ;)
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04-10-2012, 07:35 PM (This post was last modified: 07-30-2020, 12:47 PM by fuck_prohibition.)
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04-12-2012, 04:53 PM
Great poem. I like your AA BB rhyme scheme. You fell off the pattern in the 3rd stanza, but either way.

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04-13-2012, 12:59 AM
Pretty nice poem. I can't rhyme for crap, but when I attempt, I don't make anything near this standard.
I like how you managed to portray society, and stick to the OP.
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