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Move On -- By Curtiie Boii
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Move On


I know that times are hard enough
Let alone with all the stuff that goes on
You just gotta stay here hold on through
Stay here hold on strong
Careful now this world is fragile


Oh.. I know his gone but that’s not forever
Common girl just bring up that beautiful smile
Oh.. Remember theirs no no giving up NOT EVER
This world may end but his heart is always there
But what do you do


Because i was told that I need to
Move on….. Just gotta
Move on….. (To the other life)
Is there time for looking back
Or do you just move on


It’s like my heart in battle with your head
Two different things are in your mind
You’ve gotta play it right one on one there is no sides
Because one wrong step and this life
This life can break down in two


Because i was told that I need to
Move on….. Just gotta
Move on….. (To the other life)
Is there time for looking back
Or do you just move on


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YEH... I'm a song writer/singer whats your problem.
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#2
Dang dude you like writeing these songs there pretty good allso! Keep doing what your doing.
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#3
Good job on the lyrics mate. They sound great in coordination with each other and the hook/chorus is pretty clean.
Overall, well done. Hope to see more of your works in the Creative Writing section.
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#4
Thank you blackchaos i like all the feed back i get from anyone, i just wish that more people would comment so i have more feedback haha.

Thank you
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#5
damn... keep up the good work
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#6
Sounds good, if this is a song, i'd love to hear you play it.
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