04-12-2011, 09:19 AM
(This post was last modified: 04-12-2011, 09:23 AM by Swat Runs Train.)
(04-12-2011, 09:15 AM)Astrael Wrote: lol, it's all good. At least you tried XD
I would change this:
have grossed over a thousand dollars in profit
Gross is generally referring to total money brought in before expenses and overhead are subtracted, profit being the resulting figure so it doesn't make sense to use both to refer to the same amount of money.
I would also replace:
I have used the programs
With either:
I have experience with these programs...
Or
I have used many programs, including...