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Working on a novel.
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Here is the first chapter. I'm not a writer, but I'm trying to improve my writing skills
A lot of it is supposed to be in italics so some things would make sense.
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#2
It seems very well put together. I think it could be a little longer. I like the suspense at the end.
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(03-05-2011, 11:56 AM)Robo22 Wrote: It seems very well put together. I think it could be a little longer. I like the suspense at the end.
Thanks. I'm working on Chapter 2, but I'm trying to figure out how to get them from the airport to the Global Agency center without it seeming to skippy.
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#4
It is kinda good. Good luck on writing this book or whatever you count it as.
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So far it looks like an interesting read. Whats the name of the novel going to be?
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