Castle.

[Rhythm]

A castle is built on a cloud
The castle contains many people, in many rooms.
One of these people, in one of these rooms
In which he does reside.
Finds a trapdoor which he opens
To find out whats inside
All he sees is darkness
But he slowly climbs through
In this darkness he hears silence.
Silence.

The trapdoor disappears
And he remains alone
The darkness turns to light
He feels that he is home
Wouldn't it be grand
If in every room, a door.
In which we could escape
For now, or evermore.

[Deltron]

The imagery of this is pretty crazy. I can imagine it so easily

Good job man.

[Rhythm]

Thanks
I think this is my favorite one.

[Corpse]

So a man finding peace of mind in a non-existing place to escape reality, I like it The thing is that why would someone want to escape reality when he lives on a cloud? Seems like a great place to be.

[Daniel Faraday]

So a man finding peace of mind in a non-existing place to escape reality, I like it The thing is that why would someone want to escape reality when he lives on a cloud? Seems like a great place to be.

...
He's obviously using the cloud as a metaphor.

[Mr. President]

The imagery of this is pretty crazy. I can imagine it so easily

Good job man.

Ya i was about to say the same the imagery is very good! great post OP

[Jay]

The imagery of this is pretty crazy. I can imagine it so easily

Good job man.

This is what I was thinking before I read your post.
Obviously I'm not the only one thinking this, great post.

[Triny511]

The imagery of this is pretty crazy. I can imagine it so easily

Good job man.

Yeah same here, it gives a description, but lets my mind full describe with imagery.

[Snookerbro]

Did you write it yourself man? It's great mate

Cheers

[Knight]

Vivid imagery, nice work. I've always been a fan of poems.