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Very sad, but very true
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09-22-2010, 05:14 PM (This post was last modified: 01-27-2013, 05:40 PM by Akihiko.)
Mary had a little lamb whose fleece was white as snow
Unfortunately this mary girl always wanted a pencil to blow
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09-23-2010, 12:44 PM
Very deep poem, and yes its true Big Grin
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09-24-2010, 08:50 AM
(09-23-2010, 12:44 PM)~Rei Wrote: Very deep poem, and yes its true Big Grin

Thank you Big Grin
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09-24-2010, 11:32 AM
Seems like someone is deeply hurt ....where did you got this poem????
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09-24-2010, 03:28 PM
(09-24-2010, 11:32 AM)Technology Wrote: Seems like someone is deeply hurt ....where did you got this poem????

I wrote it. :3
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09-29-2010, 07:48 PM
Absolutely fantastic! I actually really enjoyed it! I loved the ending. I hope to see some more of your work in the future. Keep it up!
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09-29-2010, 10:03 PM
Wow Aki... Who inspired you to write this? Very nice peace. I don't think I'd be able to write something like it, even if I was hurt.
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09-30-2010, 10:36 AM
I loved the poem. Short, but sweet. Like Gadget asked, who inspired you to write it?
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09-30-2010, 05:18 PM
Whoa, wasn't expecting a deep poem.
I liked it, it was pieced together perfectly.
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10-01-2010, 05:02 AM
Wow Who inspired you/what to write this did this happen to you ?
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