Rate my second Sig

[Samurai]

This is my second sig. I checked out a few tutorials on google and this is the final resault. Could you give it an out of 10 rating and give me some feedback on how to improve.
Thank you

[bkotz]

the render is cut out really badly
u tried using c4ds which is good but arnt executed right
the text is to big and doesnt look good
also the render shouldnt have so much over top of it

keep reading the tutorials and ull get the hang of it

[Phreak]

Yeh Rendering And All That Sorta Stuff Will Take A Lot Of Practice

[Secret]

Text is way too big, and I can't see what you tried to do. Whats your focal point?