Something I am writing for my English homework.

[Ally Mac]

I read the first bit and stopped;;
Although the book is in some sense "geeky" or "highly intellectual" it covers some very important aspects, in a very bizarre way, the author. Michael Crichton, has turned, ingeniously, an "informative book" into a fast paced thriller, a very interesting read.

One sentence? Sure, complex sentences give you brownie points, but you need to structure it a lot better.

I'm confused.

Although the book is in some sense "geeky" or "highly intellectual"

Because it isn't literally intellectual, it is in-adamant.

, in a very bizarre way, the author,

Comma's are around it because that part isn't necessary to be there, the sentence will make sense without it, so comma's are required.

the author, Michael Crichton

Changed the comma to a Fullstop.

has turned, ingeniously

Is required, but ingeniously is not. Commas are required.


~A