01-28-2012, 05:49 PM
In my opinion, be more insightful. Example;
“You probably could beat them both, if you came back to fight here” she insisted in a stubborn manner.
Now, I don't know if stubborn is what you intended that line to feel as, but I think you catch my drift.
“You probably could beat them both, if you came back to fight here” she insisted in a stubborn manner.
Now, I don't know if stubborn is what you intended that line to feel as, but I think you catch my drift.