Not bad, personally like the last line, very good. Has a good flow and rhythm to it, and possibly in the future for my girlfriends birthday I might put this in the card 
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[Short Poem] Together We Fall
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[Short Poem] Together We Fall - by Spafic - 12-17-2011, 12:17 PM
RE: [Short Poem] Together We Fall - by Epeolatry - 12-17-2011, 12:57 PM
RE: [Short Poem] Together We Fall - by Spafic - 12-17-2011, 01:04 PM
RE: [Short Poem] Together We Fall - by #Snoop Dogg - 12-17-2011, 04:46 PM
RE: [Short Poem] Together We Fall - by DaUB3R - 12-21-2011, 11:26 AM
RE: [Short Poem] Together We Fall - by waqas001 - 12-23-2011, 09:18 AM
RE: [Short Poem] Together We Fall - by King - 12-24-2011, 02:31 AM
RE: [Short Poem] Together We Fall - by Spafic - 12-30-2011, 12:18 PM
RE: [Short Poem] Together We Fall - by OVO™ - 12-30-2011, 01:47 PM
RE: [Short Poem] Together We Fall - by Pikachu - 12-30-2011, 11:36 PM
RE: [Short Poem] Together We Fall - by Quizzical - 01-03-2012, 11:19 PM
RE: [Short Poem] Together We Fall - by Yellows - 01-04-2012, 03:43 PM
RE: [Short Poem] Together We Fall - by PuertoRican - 01-04-2012, 05:52 PM
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