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[Poem] Rain of Steel
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For those that have read my poems, war and violence are a main point in all my writing. Tell me what you think it means to you, and leave feedback.

Rain falls from the heavens.
Tears from angels high,
Grieving for lives lost.
Those who perish,
Wet the Earth more.
This is what shall become,
Unless we unite as one.
Water will become steel,
Piercing our hearts.
This is what shall be,
If we live off greed.
Lay down your arms,
Embrace each other.
For the rain will fall.

-Ronald Munday

My poems follow no real guidelines, they're just thoughts that I form into a structure.
We all have things we want to say, but not publicly. We all need help with them at one point. If you want a private conversation or seek private help, send me a PM.
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[Poem] Rain of Steel - by Metapod - 04-28-2011, 12:39 PM
RE: [Poem] Rain of Steel - by Do0ks - 04-28-2011, 12:47 PM
RE: [Poem] Rain of Steel - by Metapod - 04-28-2011, 12:52 PM
RE: [Poem] Rain of Steel - by BlackChaos - 04-28-2011, 01:44 PM
RE: [Poem] Rain of Steel - by Metapod - 04-28-2011, 01:54 PM

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