Thread Rating:
  • 0 Vote(s) - 0 Average
  • 1
  • 2
  • 3
  • 4
  • 5
Friend's poetry.
#1
Here is one of her poems. I am keeping her identity a secret, but here is her poem.

when a man says get down on yours knees i do as im told,
just to cut his achilles, watch his blood flow.
to watch him scream and let tears stream,
down his face like the waves of a sea.
I kick his side to watch him gasp,
I can make him beg, and make him weep, but im through with, "sorry's," you're too weak,
when im done with that i'll slit his throat and end the waste of life he showed.


Now something I noticed strange is when she types usually almost every word is caps. As you can see in her poetry it is different. I've thought about this for a while, and it puzzles me.

When The Roses Die And The Water Runs Dry Souls May Die But No Longer Will He Lie. Liars Be Warned I Will Cut Your Tongue, Enjoying Being Hung Cause Your Fate Has Been Sung.

I'm trusting you guys to not copy and use as your own.
Those who want to live, let them fight, and those who do not want to fight in this world of eternal struggle do not deserve to live.
-Adolf Hitler


A man may die, nations may rise and fall, but an idea lives on.
-JFK



Reply


Messages In This Thread
Friend's poetry. - by Codad Law - 03-22-2011, 07:05 PM
RE: Friend's poetry. - by Eve - 03-22-2011, 10:04 PM
RE: Friend's poetry. - by fuck_prohibition - 03-23-2011, 03:08 PM
RE: Friend's poetry. - by Eve - 03-24-2011, 06:25 AM
RE: Friend's poetry. - by SeaBanana - 06-19-2011, 09:51 AM

Possibly Related Threads…
Thread Author Replies Views Last Post
  First attempt at poetry Hуѕтєяιa X™ 36 5,495 06-24-2012, 06:47 PM
Last Post: gsc3po
  Some Poetry, by Kurtz. Kurtz 0 528 05-03-2012, 09:28 PM
Last Post: Kurtz
  Define poetry G0dfath3r 18 2,394 07-16-2011, 05:34 AM
Last Post: Mr. Beaux
  how to write poetry? Reality 14 2,710 05-13-2011, 12:26 PM
Last Post: BlackChaos
  How to write poetry/Where to start. Beautiful 5 1,143 12-11-2010, 11:01 PM
Last Post: Beautiful

Forum Jump:


Users browsing this thread: 1 Guest(s)