When You're Sixteen ~ Twicks [RATE]

[AceInfinity]

And now for the constructive critisizm...

The white 'cloud' above the render's left eye from the perspective of the person viewing the image doesn't look right to me. The clouds don't quite blend in with the actual render itself, and the left side looks a bit too plain. Text placement is okay. The colors on the far left and right could be used as a color scheme if the transitions were better, so that needs improvement

[Twicks]

And now for the constructive critisizm...

The white 'cloud' above the render's left eye from the perspective of the person viewing the image doesn't look right to me. The clouds don't quite blend in with the actual render itself, and the left side looks a bit too plain. Text placement is okay. The colors on the far left and right could be used as a color scheme if the transitions were better, so that needs improvement

That "white cloud" is part of her hat...
Yes, I do agree that the transition could be better :/

Thanks!

[Nympho]

Too much orange.. ;d
Nevermind. You maybe shouldn't use so much brushes, but.. It looks good anyway.
8/10

[Dεlluzion]

It's a really nice picture, I have to say. Well done, 7/10.

[Twicks]

It's a really nice picture, I have to say. Well done, 7/10.

Thanks!

Too much orange.. ;d
Nevermind. You maybe shouldn't use so much brushes, but.. It looks good anyway.
8/10

I didn't use any brushes...

[Invincible]

Thats a nice work mate, and that girl really looks like Veryx's ex. OH btw veryx your Ex is beautiful

[Trustable]

I like it, 8/10!