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Abysmal Tasks - Omniscient - 12-26-2011
Abysmal Tasks by Jesse LaBrocca
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I feel the stress bearing down on me
Like bricks on the first floor of a skyscraper
No amount of will can sustain
The abysmal tasks I must maintain
Looking forward to nothingness
When my burden is no longer missed
But today I must take up the struggle
And search my soul for discipline
RE: Abysmal Tasks - BlackChaos - 12-26-2011
Short and sweet. Definitely a nice piece there.
I see there's a lot more to you than meets the eye.
RE: Abysmal Tasks - King - 12-26-2011
I like what you wrote in the last two lines the most.
Quote:But today I must take up the struggle
And search my soul for discipline
Shows the importance of recognising optimism and a very strong work ethic. Two things I'm very passionate about.