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[Short Poem] Endurance - Metapod - 06-21-2011

Just a short little snippet really. I think it is nice though.

When all seems lost,
Open your eyes.

When time drags on,
Open your ears.

When the world seems bleak,
Open your mind.

When you lose yourself...
Open your heart.


RE: [Short Poem] Endurance - Barneyyz™ - 06-21-2011

This is a pretty meaningful little poem, very well made! I've noticed quite a few of your threads with Stories and Poems, they really are good!

Keep up the good work :-)


RE: [Short Poem] Endurance - Bяian ♪ - 06-24-2011

Short, sweet and at the same time useful advice. I like this <3


RE: [Short Poem] Endurance - Kewlz - 06-24-2011

Nice and Meaningful poem.


RE: [Short Poem] Endurance - Kuroi - 06-24-2011

Nice, I was never really good at poems. My last school project was about poems. I only turned in about a third of them.


RE: [Short Poem] Endurance - Metapod - 06-24-2011

Thank you guys Smile

Kuroi Wrote:Nice, I was never really good at poems. My last school project was about poems. I only turned in about a third of them.

I hated English class lol...


RE: [Short Poem] Endurance - Jason - 06-25-2011

That's what everyone should do in everyday life. Great poem!


RE: [Short Poem] Endurance - Strong - 06-27-2011

Really nice poem bro!


RE: [Short Poem] Endurance - RAT - 07-05-2011

Haha i like this poem, it seems very deep and meaningful.
Please keep up the good work and continue to write Smile


RE: [Short Poem] Endurance - SeaBanana - 07-05-2011

This poem is truly meanful, you should do another poem Smile