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[Poem] Mourning Glory - Metapod - 04-28-2011
Here's a short poem I just made. Feedback?
Valiantly he stood alone,
A symbol among men.
Bodies all around,
His sword gleaming crimson.
Flag bestowed upon his back,
He plants it into the Earth.
Now, victorious and worn,
He casts his sword aside.
He vows never to fight,
For he mourns what he sees.
-Ronald Munday
RE: A Short Poem - BlackChaos - 04-28-2011
Excellent phrasing and appropriate use of appropriate words =)
Keep up the great work and I hope to see more of your poems here.
RE: A Short Poem - Invincible - 04-28-2011
Nice work mate, great use of words.
RE: A Short Poem - Do0ks - 04-28-2011
Dude, Not bad at all. I like it. It tells a story.
RE: A Short Poem - Metapod - 04-28-2011
Haha thanks guys
I made this last night, couldn't sleep. I had a weird image in my head of a knight on a hill. It seemed so vidid so I made a poem out of it XD
Thanks for all the nice words
RE: A Short Poem - rootkit - 04-28-2011
This sounds like a power metal song to me
I like it!
RE: [Poem] Mourning Glory - Metapod - 04-28-2011
I updated the thread and named my poem
RE: [Poem] Mourning Glory - BlackChaos - 04-28-2011
(04-28-2011, 01:40 PM)Veryx Wrote: I updated the thread and named my poem
Hehe. I though I was the only one who uses that format of titles.
RE: [Poem] Mourning Glory - Metapod - 04-28-2011
(04-28-2011, 01:41 PM)BlackChaos Wrote: Hehe. I though I was the only one who uses that format of titles.
Yeah I noticed that and I liked so I started using it
RE: [Poem] Mourning Glory - BlackChaos - 04-28-2011
(04-28-2011, 01:53 PM)Veryx Wrote: Yeah I noticed that and I liked so I started using it
Well, I'm pleased someone noticed
Glad you liked it. If you ever need inspiration, PM me or check out my threads
