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Hey guys. So my sister came to me with a poem she wrote and I thought it was really good. I thought it would be cool to share it with you guys and check out some opinions. I'll probably share them with my sister and inspire her to write some more. Smile
She's 9 years old.

Winter Girl

In the winter morning
Where the snowflakes fell
There was ice everywhere as well
There was nothing much
But winter air
And the children played without a care
A girl stood and stared
At snowflakes which fell to the ground
Not making a single sound
She wore a plain top
As she skipped and hopped
She wore black jeans
As she leaned and leaned
But didn't fall
As she held on to her dear doll
Now I'll tell you her name
But her mother came
And shouted "Mary, come in!"



Like brother, like sister eh? Whistle
That's pretty good for a 9 year old. She could be a great writer one day if she keeps it up. Smile
Thank you for the positive comment. I showed it to her and definitely brought a smile to her face. Smile
wow I cant believe it that your sister is only 9 years old.
Its amazing , please give her my best wishes for her future and tell her that she should never stop writing.. She could be a great writer/poet in the near future Smile
(02-14-2012, 06:52 AM)Crystal Wrote: [ -> ]wow I cant believe it that your sister is only 9 years old.
Its amazing , please give her my best wishes for her future and tell her that she should never stop writing.. She could be a great writer/poet in the near future Smile

Thank you very much.
Your comment had her dancing around for quite a bit. Smile
That's pretty nice, possibly the next Robert Frost poet? lol Smile It even has a distinguished rhyme scheme.
(02-17-2012, 10:03 PM)AceInfinity Wrote: [ -> ]That's pretty nice, possibly the next Robert Frost poet? lol Smile It even has a distinguished rhyme scheme.

"Two roads diverged in a yellow wood"
Funnily enough, Robert Frost is one of my most favorite poets. Big Grin
Thanks for the reply Ace.
When i read your poem, I shivered for abit, it makes me feel cold inside.
Wow. Im amazed. Tell her to keep writing. She could turn this into a profession.
wow thats really good and shes only nine you say? tell her to make it a hobby and she could become professional writer!
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