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Quote:Why Should I Try?
When You're Beautiful in my Eye...
So I ask myself, Why?
why should I Try..
Looking at the mirror, staring at a wall.
While I just lay here and watch myself fall.
These Dreams and Thoughts will never come true.
Because every single one of them involve me and you.
Now I sit here with a Broken Heart,
while slowly my mind starts to Tear Apart..
Simple, yet moving. How long did it take you to make this back then?
This is lovely, a very touching piece. Well done!
This reminded me of my first week of 6th grade back in the day.
I remember it clearly tho there was a girl named Abigale and she was in the classroom across from me my 5th period
so i would get in trouble just to go sit in the hallway and be able to see her she was an 8th grader.
I am now graduated from school and am going to end up going to college soon but long story short.
I pretty much wrote everyday in my journal about my feelings i had for this girl ( she was obviously creeped out )
But i was young and stupid and thought it would be cute so i gave her the journal to read..
and she pretty much read the first half and threw it away then never talked to me after that.
Oh well
Didn't copy right it! stealing this! lol jk
but nice poem
I don't understand how you can write a poem - seriously. Like...maybe you need to write it about something that actually means something to you. :\
Nice, very deep. Do you still write them?
Go and sing/read it to her!
You got talent !
This is really nice.
If I were her I'd have a tear running down my face.