03-10-2011, 09:14 PM
03-10-2011, 09:17 PM
I think there's too much going on in the background alongside the effects on the main character.
Try choosing a C4D with less going on.
Other than that, the pink glowing spots should be a reddish, matching the characters clothes.
Try choosing a C4D with less going on.
Other than that, the pink glowing spots should be a reddish, matching the characters clothes.
03-10-2011, 09:53 PM
I like the concept, and it's contrast, I don't think they should be red instead of pink though from what Deltron has said. I think that would make the image too bland. But other than that, If your title wasn't "When the moon comes up" I would have wondered what the circle is in the background. It doesn't seem like a moon at all. It's hard to make that out.
03-11-2011, 04:32 AM
(03-10-2011, 09:17 PM)Deltron Wrote: [ -> ]I think there's too much going on in the background alongside the effects on the main character.
Try choosing a C4D with less going on.
Other than that, the pink glowing spots should be a reddish, matching the characters clothes.
I think the c4ds he has are perfect actually.
This might be my favourite piece of yours.
Only thing I would criticise is those purple dots
I would probaly change them to silver or white.
Apart from that I'm liking it.
03-11-2011, 04:37 AM
It's pretty much awesome, how much time did it took you?
The only problem I see, is you get lost in all those details. Besides from that I love it.
The only problem I see, is you get lost in all those details. Besides from that I love it.