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I am The Lyrical Hypnosis, I am a poet. The only thing I rep is being creative with my lyrics.

The truth is, I'm lost without you left to stray
You really are out of this world because when I'm with you, you take my breath away.
There's no place I'd rather be, than with you if I was facing death today.



Just something I put together. I know it's not much but just a lot on my mind.

It's quite a nice meaningful poem. Is this a WIP i.e in a first stanza or is this a small piece?

Yes, thats easy for you to make as well as I also want to say that its really that much easy to remember. I just want to say that it is short and sweet. The one thing is that if we want to remind that than also it is easy to be remember.

It's short, meaningful, and has a cool kick to it.

Good job.

I liked it, good job.

very creative, meaningful.

i like it, very nice (:

You should make one that rhymes those are cool!