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My brother gave me permission to post these here. Anyone caught plagiarizing these poems will have legal action taken against them

Quote:Mystery
In the greatest silence of the Earth,
There is no peace, and there is no chaos.
No tension is felt; a soul: undisturbed.
Not a doubt, nor an inquiry is made.
This phenomena is natural, and comes as no shock.
However, the world halts beneath its force.
What could cause such unchallenged captivation?
It is the greatest spectacle, and yet not one at all--
--Mystery.

Quote:Subconscious
I see what is not truly there,
I hear what does not truly sound,
I feel what does not truly exist;
I live in a world without reality.
These visions, more colorful than anything I have ever seen.
These sounds, more beautiful than an angelic choir.
These feelings, gentler than a mother’s touch.
It is dark, yet these sights are more clear than a mountain stream.
It is silent, yet these sounds are more audible than an orchestral symphony.
It is not real, yet these objects are more tangible than the earth itself.
Reality and truth are lost in this realm--
--Subconscious.

Quote:Human
I am beautiful.
I am art.
I am perfect.
The spawn of a god makes for a godly child.
I am ghastly.
I am repulsive.
I am flawed.
The blood of a mortal makes for an imperfect being.
I am--
--Human.

These are quite good poems. I liked this lot. Thanks to you and your brother for sharing these.

Gifted. Much talent within your brother. However, there's more to the poetry then the superficial meaning. I'd look into that.

I really like the "Human" poem. Your brother is talented.

pretty good poems maybe get them published?

(07-25-2010, 11:11 PM)Xenon Diosmitide Wrote: [ -> ]Gifted. Much talent within your brother. However, there's more to the poetry then the superficial meaning. I'd look into that.

What do you mean by "I'd look into that."

I actually really enjoyed reading them. Tell your brother that Virtual Reality says thanks!

I'm glad you guys liked these!

Wow. Look, luna, it takes a lot to make me actually stop and reread a poem. Only things by Robert Frost or the great Edgar Poe make me do that.

Your brother has... IMMENSE. Potential.

(08-01-2010, 10:51 PM)Tank Wrote: [ -> ]Wow. Look, luna, it takes a lot to make me actually stop and reread a poem. Only things by Robert Frost or the great Edgar Poe make me do that.

Your brother has... IMMENSE. Potential.

Coming from you, that means A LOT!