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A Cold Winters Day
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01-23-2012, 08:48 AM
(01-22-2012, 10:58 PM)Daniel Faraday Wrote: It sounds like you're trying to sound better at writing than you are. Saying this is a little rude, but it looks like you're trying to hard. It's funny, because I didn't try to write this. I just typed it as I went through the story, completely from the top of my head. I used to be a story writer when I was in school, so I thought I'd give it a go again. |
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A Cold Winters Day - by BreShiE - 01-21-2012, 11:51 AM
RE: A Cold Winters Day - by BreShiE - 01-21-2012, 02:55 PM
RE: A Cold Winters Day - by Death Disturbance - 01-21-2012, 04:45 PM
RE: A Cold Winters Day - by BreShiE - 01-21-2012, 04:48 PM
RE: A Cold Winters Day - by BreShiE - 01-21-2012, 09:50 PM
RE: A Cold Winters Day - by BreShiE - 01-22-2012, 05:29 AM
RE: A Cold Winters Day - by Daniel Faraday - 01-22-2012, 10:58 PM
RE: A Cold Winters Day - by BreShiE - 01-23-2012, 08:48 AM
RE: A Cold Winters Day - by BlackChaos - 01-24-2012, 06:57 AM
RE: A Cold Winters Day - by BreShiE - 01-24-2012, 07:17 AM
RE: A Cold Winters Day - by BlackChaos - 01-24-2012, 07:20 AM
RE: A Cold Winters Day - by BreShiE - 01-24-2012, 07:43 AM
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