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First Attempt at C4D
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#1
06-25-2011, 11:41 PM
This is my very first attempt at Cinema 4D studio. I really want feedback positive or negative.


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#2
06-26-2011, 12:23 AM
I love the graphic.

It has great colors. Great shadowing. And I love the 3-D.

However,
I think you should space out the 'Trials' evenly. Maybe spread them out more.

Nice work!
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06-26-2011, 01:10 AM (This post was last modified: 06-26-2011, 01:11 AM by ๖ۣۜDunsparth.)
(06-26-2011, 12:23 AM)Chick-Fil-A Wrote: I love the graphic.

It has great colors. Great shadowing. And I love the 3-D.

However,
I think you should space out the 'Trials' evenly. Maybe spread them out more.

Nice work!


I couldnt agree anymore.

9/10

Good work bro u have potential.

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06-26-2011, 12:36 PM
wow i like the colors great work keep it up 9/10
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06-26-2011, 12:41 PM
(06-26-2011, 12:36 PM)courage Wrote: wow i like the colors great work keep it up 9/10
That is what I say, that is very good for a first time!

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#6
06-27-2011, 12:51 AM
I love it. I love the scheme of it.
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#7
06-27-2011, 06:11 AM
it's a really cool first attempt.
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#8
06-27-2011, 07:44 PM
The light source seems to be coming from the top right (looking at the shadow on Trials), but on INF the shadow is leaning to the left, so I would suggest moving the shadow up a bit.

Other than that, looks really nice. Great job.
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#9
06-27-2011, 08:46 PM
This is really good for your first attempt.

I'm going to give it a 9/10.

Great job!
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#10
06-27-2011, 09:13 PM
This is your 1st? Damn... It is really good.
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