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Not Creative Writing, but need C&C / Proofread
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(04-12-2011, 09:15 AM)Astrael Wrote: lol, it's all good. At least you tried XD

I would change this:

have grossed over a thousand dollars in profit

Gross is generally referring to total money brought in before expenses and overhead are subtracted, profit being the resulting figure so it doesn't make sense to use both to refer to the same amount of money.

I would also replace:

I have used the programs

With either:

I have experience with these programs...

Or

I have used many programs, including...

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RE: Not Creative Writing, but need C&C / Proofread - by Swat Runs Train - 04-12-2011, 09:19 AM

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