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Something I wrote for my parents
#1
Quote:Title: I am nothing to you.

I am your son,
I am your slave.
I do what you say;
I must obey.

I pretend to listen while you scream,
While I burn inside as you destroy my dream.

I might run off, we will never know.
But if I do, to hell I shall go.

Or maybe it's freedom?
Freedom from the hate,
the fighting,
the stress.
Freedom from the hell you put me through.

I don't love you, you're not even my friend.
You may think you are, but it's just pretend.

As I write this, I keep saying to myself,
"Why, oh why haven't I killed myself?"

/discuss
Ninja
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#2
Are you emo? Tongue
Pretty nice. Its like you're mirroring yourself.
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#3
Oh wow, that's deep. You going through some tough times?
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#4
It's good written, why do you hate your parents?
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#5
hmmm, i didn't like the kill myself part. But i did like it overall.
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#6
That's a cruel thing to say to your parents. I mean there are other indirect ways to say you hate them.
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#7
They have probably done so much effort into raising you. I would never talk to my parents that way, no matter what they did to me.

Although it is a good writing, I suggest you work your problems out as it sounds pretty serious.
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#8
Don't talk to parents like that,seriously.The computer you're writing from was bought by your parents right? Smile
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#9
You should love and respect your parents, no matter what.

Well written btw.
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#10
I appreciate that you written this for your parents. Did you tell 'em about it?
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