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Diss track, PT2.
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Yellin fu©k me, well guess what, fu©k you,
You spit so many lies, do you ever tell the truth,
You're telling people that I beat ya,
If you wanna say I beat ya,
Tell your boyfriend come see me,
and I'll teach him how I beat ya,
With a 9 to the side of the head,
And now he's dead,
Would you lie about that too,
Would you tell 'em what I said,
Would you tell him what you said,
Should I tell him what you said,
I think I'll tell him what you said,
You said,

[When he's gone, you text me,
Does he know, about the key,
Does he know, where you go,
Does he know, you're a hoe]

Lyrics go from 13 seconds to 57 seconds, it's short because the beat cuts out and another cuts in, and I couldn't be assed looping it.

The area inside the brackets would be clear singing.

I'll probably invite a friend over and we'll work on making a beat based off that beat and finish the song.
I sit in this small hole and think

the voices aren't real

but they have the most beautiful ideas.
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#2
I don't really like this beat , but the lyrics sound pretty live.
Keep it up, I wanna hear a piece with some vocals next time!

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#3
Tempted to record my vocals over it. Would you mind OP? (Your lyrics)
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