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#1
Removed.
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#2
Get a better computer representation and get rid of those grey bars.
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#3
The grey and orange make it look to boring.
Get some better contrasting colors.
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#4
Personally I would change it all but if you want to improve this, you should combine the email and phone number onto 1 line.
Remove the part of the wire that you can see through the computer chassis. The current computer looks boring and ugly maybe change it. Smile
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#5
It needs to be more attractive, i will try and put something together for you tonight.
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#6
Thank you Saint Michael, that'd be great!
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#7
Add prices maybe? Such as: Starting from only £x.xx !!
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#8
The font doesn't fit to be on a leaflet.
The computer looks boring

But the overal layout is ok.
Just fix the boring look Smile
With more attractive colors
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#9
It looks very simple, and uhm.. basic? Sorry if I'm harsh, but you need more attraction and pizazz.
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#10
How do you feel about the white background as these will be printed as A5 gloss leaflets is white most suitable?
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