Writing for the first time

[NekoChan]

So I know this girl who writes a lot and I mean a lot. By a lot, I mean she writes pretty much 24/7, because she has that much PC time. So we both watch anime and read manga and I have always been interested in my own manga. Since I can't drawn I have been thinking about making my own story in a manga style. Iv read a lot of her fan fictions, that is where I got my inspiration with how my dialog and everything looks. Bare in mind this is my first time
It was like 4:20 AM when I started and it's 4:54 and this is what I have wrote so far, taking a smoke break now.

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On a misty daylight our story has begun, when Yin noticed a Déjà vu. He knew he has seen that girl somewhere before, but couldn’t recall where so he just kept walking. When he finally arrived at the house he was already late for the show.

“Come already, no time to waste, they already started” she said. There was a huge tension around the stage as 2 great martial artists battled each other in a friendly match.
“You probably could beat them both, if you came back to fight here” she insisted.
“That is my past, I have told you enough times, I am a different man now” Explained Yin.
While the women got mad “Don’t give me ‘I am a changed man’ crap, you come here every week to watch this fight.”



This is a land of Japan where government can’t reach and every man has to watch out for themselves. It’s a waste land for the criminals and poor people. Mostly populated with Samurais who fight each other for little money. No laws, no police, no military, it’s a paradise for the strong , but hell for the week. Yin is a lazy traveler who has put away his way of the Samurai, saying that the Samurai lost it’s respect in this land long time ago.

While Yin was walking on the street, he accidently bumped into somebody. He didn’t see who it was, the man was in a hurry and just continued walking. When suddenly he heard a voice from behind.
“Is that you Yin” asked the suspicious man. “And who might you you be weird old man” responded Yin, without actually knowing the age of who he was talking with.