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03-07-2010, 09:24 PM

(03-07-2010, 09:17 PM)Slankey Wrote: is this the thesis statement?

Because if it isn't than this is one short essay

No.

It's 5 paragraphs long. I'd rather make a short one that gets the point across than a very long one that bores my readers.

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Critique this essay? - by Elektrisk - 12-09-2009, 04:08 PM

RE: Critique this essay? - by ElephantShoe - 12-09-2009, 04:37 PM

RE: Critique this essay? - by Ionica - 12-10-2009, 06:22 PM

RE: Critique this essay? - by WirelessWave - 12-10-2009, 07:29 PM

RE: Critique this essay? - by UID=0 - 12-11-2009, 04:29 AM

RE: Critique this essay? - by Tank - 12-11-2009, 08:50 AM

RE: Critique this essay? - by Elektrisk - 12-11-2009, 10:22 AM

RE: Critique this essay? - by Omniscient - 12-11-2009, 10:53 AM

RE: Critique this essay? - by WirelessWave - 12-11-2009, 03:11 PM

RE: Critique this essay? - by Tank - 12-13-2009, 02:39 AM

RE: Critique this essay? - by WirelessWave - 12-15-2009, 02:35 PM

RE: Critique this essay? - by Tank - 12-15-2009, 10:24 PM

RE: Critique this essay? - by Slankey - 03-07-2010, 09:17 PM

RE: Critique this essay? - by Elektrisk - 03-07-2010, 09:24 PM

RE: Critique this essay? - by Foresight - 03-09-2010, 11:07 PM

RE: Critique this essay? - by smileyface - 04-08-2010, 03:02 AM

RE: Critique this essay? - by Gosu - 04-08-2010, 09:40 AM

RE: Critique this essay? - by Elektrisk - 04-09-2010, 12:36 AM

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