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Yin's Poetry - Nature - Yin - 04-07-2010
Nature
The meadow is green
The sky is blue.
This is nature
Mother Nature created this ingenuity.
Inert water
Makes no noise on the beach.
She made it for us to worship;
The beautiful chromaticity.
The phenomenon we know as nature
Is fancied by many.
Worship or despise,
It'll be here always.
RE: Yin's Poetry - Nature - Foresight - 04-07-2010
That was beautiful Yin. Thanks for sharing this. Do you write poetry often?
RE: Yin's Poetry - Nature - Yin - 04-07-2010
Yeah, pretty often. I'll write one for you if you give me a topic.
RE: Yin's Poetry - Nature - Tank - 04-08-2010
Very simple, however concise. 6/10. ^_^
RE: Yin's Poetry - Nature - smileyface - 04-08-2010
Wow. It's beautiful. Though it doesn't conform to classical poetry. The measure and rhyming pattern is different. Pretty much like neo poetry.
RE: Yin's Poetry - Nature - Anubis™ - 04-08-2010
awwwhh...beautiful =D
RE: Yin's Poetry - Nature - Yin - 04-08-2010
It took me like 3 minutes to make, so pretty good.
RE: Yin's Poetry - Nature - Industrialized™ - 07-03-2010
Once again an amazing poem, You are a modern day genius man.
RE: Yin's Poetry - Nature - Blue_Social - 08-01-2010
Again with this awsomeness!
Thanks for another fantastic share to the Creative Writing section Yin!
I wish I can find some of my old poetry now. Where did I put it?
RE: Yin's Poetry - Nature - shanerm09 - 08-02-2010
Yin is very creative in writing. He writes a poem about nature. I salute you for giving time and importance to our nature.