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Demetri Martin-"Dammit im mad" - n00bikscube - 11-24-2011 Demetri martin made a 224-word palindrome poem. This is said poem. "Dammit I'm Mad" Dammit I’m mad. Evil is a deed as I live. God, am I reviled? I rise, my bed on a sun, I melt. To be not one man emanating is sad. I piss. Alas, it is so late. Who stops to help? Man, it is hot. I’m in it. I tell. I am not a devil. I level “Mad Dog”. Ah, say burning is, as a deified gulp, In my halo of a mired rum tin. I erase many men. Oh, to be man, a sin. Is evil in a clam? In a trap? No. It is open. On it I was stuck. Rats peed on hope. Elsewhere dips a web. Be still if I fill its ebb. Ew, a spider… eh? We sleep. Oh no! Deep, stark cuts saw it in one position. Part animal, can I live? Sin is a name. Both, one… my names are in it. Murder? I’m a fool. A hymn I plug, deified as a sign in ruby ash, A Goddam level I lived at. On mail let it in. I’m it. Oh, sit in ample hot spots. Oh wet! A loss it is alas (sip). I’d assign it a name. Name not one bottle minus an ode by me: “Sir, I deliver. I’m a dog” Evil is a deed as I live. Dammit I’m mad. RE: Demetri Martin-"Dammit im mad" - Lеgеnd - 12-05-2011 Nice poem. I like it! xxccvv RE: Demetri Martin-"Dammit im mad" - Infinity - 12-05-2011 Lol this is kind of sad but it seems to have a deeper meaning than just what's on the surface. Very nice poem. |