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A few of my haikus! - Annuit Coeptis - 02-03-2011
I love haikus. I think they are the best form of poetry. And they are so much fun. These are a few of my haikus. I am more proud of some than others.
"No Sun"
I wake up. No Sun.
I go to school. Flourscent.
I come home. No Sun.
"School"
Why must I have work?
I've got to get a head start
So I don't fall behind.
"The weekend"
Today is sick.
Tomorrow is no better.
It must be Wednesday.
"Eating"
Cow, you eat all day.
Isn't there something better?
How 'bout eat all night?
RE: A few of my haikus! - Gaijin - 02-03-2011
I don't really see them as Poetry, but I guess is in the eye of beholder.
Anyway as much as I like reading it, I must say that "The weeken" and "Eating" ain't that good as the above ones...
All in all I like it... Hope to see some more ;)
edit:
"No Sun", is my favourite one now!...
RE: A few of my haikus! - Annuit Coeptis - 02-03-2011
(02-03-2011, 10:02 AM)Gaijin Wrote: I don't really see them as Poetry, but I guess is in the eye of beholder.
Anyway as much as I like reading it, I must say that "The weeken" and "Eating" ain't that good as the above ones...
All in all I like it... Hope to see some more ;)
edit:
"No Sun", is my favourite one now!...
I kinda agree. Haikus are the lazy man's poetry. Thanks though, I appreciate the feedback.
RE: A few of my haikus! - Jay - 02-05-2011
I've always been a fan of Haiku's, these are pretty nice!
RE: A few of my haikus! - Melted oreo - 03-02-2011
I love them, Haikus are fun to read.