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Dad - Alright - Amped - 08-28-2010 alright you come into my life every once in a while i dont like you now and i never will so stop bein in denial sit down and just think of the crap youve done told me youd be here for me but you turn around and run you think its ok to come say hey to me after leavin fudge that i dont have a dad thats what im beleavin the next time you try to say hey to me dont expect an answer i dont give a fudge no more even if you had hiv or cancer the fact i have a brother that ive never seen just proves to me you aint nothin, i mean what did you fudge his mom and leave her too not even show up to see him enter this world beautiful and new i despise you with everything ive been through just stay away and go find another girl to please you no better yet fudge that go live your life in a hole you dont deserve the life you got be happy you got your soul cause you aint got nobody not me or my brother but I thank you for showin me what not to be not to be a dad that was never there when i needed em imma give my kids the dad i never had cause imma never let my kids sittin around bein sad wonderin why their dad never came around as soon as im 18 im hittin the road gettin the fudge outta this town joinin the marines and becomin a man fightin for your freedom and if i die im dyin proud cause i know im goin to the lords kingdom alright RE: Dad - Alright - Adverce - 08-28-2010 Dang man, Hope you make it through RE: Dad - Alright - sLeepyK0z - 08-28-2010 Nice job man, I can tell it really meant a lot to you. Best way to vent some of your feeling is writing it. Sorry about the overall issue you've had. I can't say I understand because my dad is a far greater father then I'd ever wish to be. RE: Dad - Alright - KronHelp - 08-28-2010 Damn man, that hit a heartstring. Good work, damn good work. RE: Dad - Alright - Virtual Reality - 09-01-2010 This was very touching. The only thing that I would revise would be the incorrect spelling and punctuation. I was still able to read your poem, but using correct spelling and grammar would definitely raise the quality of this piece. RE: Dad - Alright - Zurmi - 09-01-2010 Wow, tough feelings. I'm joining the Marines also though, feel free to PM about it if you have questions or just want to talk. RE: Dad - Alright - DeMeR - 09-02-2010 Wow, that was from the heart. Have you told that to your dad? RE: Dad - Alright - Renegader - 09-02-2010 Wow. Th at's amazing. RE: Dad - Alright - Hustler - 09-03-2010 That was great, hope you make it through RE: Dad - Alright - Amped - 10-22-2010 Yea I'm fine now thanks. |